Minggu, 06 September 2015

my first poem

When I feel I can do something that I want
But people take me down with their mouth
Sometimes I want punch them with my anger
I do feel sorrow, I do feel like I can't hold it anymore
And I feel there's no one who care for me
And then....
I remember that I have someone who always there
Even sometimes I am away far from him
I am too busy with my "happines"
And when I need him, I talk to him
Cry with him, share my sorrow and pain to him
And he completely understand
He is my savior. My God. Jesus Christ


22 komentar:

  1. Send my greeting to your Savior :-)
    a nice poem; thanks!

    BalasHapus
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  3. Vio , thats a good poem !! Thats amazing when some people never bring their worship but youre always doing that , good job vioo :) :)

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    1. Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

      Hapus
    2. Thank you anin! I will do my best for Him

      Hapus
  4. You brings my spirit on! I won't forget my savior too vio! Nice poem :3

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    1. Good vidy. That's my point. To make everyone brings their spirit and not to forget their own savior.

      Hapus
  5. I love your poem vio. :-)
    I will remember that God always with me and he's my savior. Jesus Christ

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    1. Thank you eka. He will always love and stay by your side. Just believe.

      Hapus
  6. With God, everything is gonna be okay

    BalasHapus
  7. if blog have sign "like" i would press it a thousand time!
    ..
    I really love this poem!! *-*
    oohh Jesus :*

    BalasHapus
  8. this poem reminds me again how great is our Jesus Christ. when you have so many problems in your life, no matter how tough your life is, bring them to God, He will always listen to you and give you a relief. Jesus bless you much more Vio :D

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    1. Yes of course mega! He always brings me a relief after I talked ti Him. Jesus bless you too Mega!

      Hapus
  9. He really is!! Our everything hahaha I feel the way you feel, Vio <3<3 really touching

    BalasHapus
  10. I'm deeply in love with your poem! keep writing! xx

    BalasHapus
  11. Don't forget to pray for your friends and teacher in the writing class :-)

    BalasHapus